The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
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- Intro:
- The line graph compares the amount of money spent on buying books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria over a period of ten years between 1995 and 2005. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "AMOUNT" TIẾNG ANH
- Overall:
- Nhìn chung là tăng: the expenses on books increased in all the given four countries over time
- Germany đứng nhất: Germany spent the highest amount of money on books (HOẶC: Austrian people’s spending on books rose more quickly than any other given European countries) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "SPEND" TRONG TIẾNG ANH
- Body 1: Viết về Germany + Austria
- People in Germany’s spending on books was 80 million US dollar in 1995, and this spending increased except from 2000-2003. In 2005 their spending reached to over 95 million USD.
- Austria showed a gradual incline starting 1995 to 1999 (nêu số liệu) then surged to a high of 65 million in 2005 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "appear" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về France + Italy
- France and Italy spent about 50 million dollar in 19995 and both showed some fluctuations over the next years on their expenditure on books (nêu số liệu) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "expense" tiếng anh
- Figures for both countries reached the peak by the year 2005 (around 50-75 million respectively)
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